Draft storyOn the promenade
An Italian Scot gets the joke first
A joke can help you remember a good tip.
A draft: the words and pictures are waiting for an educator’s review.
Who’s in it
AngeloGets the point first.Meet Angelo
EddieStarts a very grand explanation.Meet Eddie
MayTurns it into an everyday example.Meet MayThe story

Outside the parlour, Eddie began a very grand explanation.

Angelo spotted the useful point before Eddie had finished.

He gave the point back in a few warm words of his own, and Eddie laughed.

May turned it into an everyday example: a bag that goes back to the shop.

Eddie joined the laugh and said the useful message again, much more simply.

Three friends, three ways of talking, and one useful tip.
Draft, 19 October 2026. The words and pictures are not yet reviewed by an educator. The story follows the outline in our story guide.
The real-life bit
A short, friendly tip is easier to remember than a long speech. Taking a bag you already have to the shops saves a new one. Gullbrae is made up. Your council’s own rules are the ones to follow.